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Friday, August 28, 2020

My first poem Ziiiiip

  Ziiiiip


Ziiiiip is as fast as a bolt of lighting.
 his eyes are very brighting.
And at night he is very frightening.
he likes to eat dip and he feels like a zip.
He is always carrying a bowl of dip,
Ziiiiip sounds like he had just 
been in a running race . 
And as he always says ''that is the case''

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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 31, 2020 at 11:11 AM

    Very good Lexie, I liked all the rhyming words you chose. I would love o read more.

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  2. AnonymousOctober 19, 2020 at 2:48 PM

    Kia ora Lexie Riley here. this writing is amazing! it has very good rhyming words and amazing words. I like it all goes together very well for just the word zip. Keep making amazing poems!.

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