From big to small and small to big.
I find a colourful twig.
All the different colours of coral I find in the coral reef.
Now I know some sea creatures have big sharp teeth.
Ohh... Look I see a treasure chest.
At the same time I see a starfish rest.
Bottle head dolphin or is it a shark.
Look at the boat is it an ark.
Sharks dolphin fish too.
Scuba divers eww a big puddle or green goo.
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Hi Lexie. I'm bella M. I like your ocean poem. This reminded me of when I did a poem about a scary forest.I like how you put in some beautiful words like colourful coral. Next time you could maybe do a another poem. When did you do this poem? Bye Bella M from yaldhurst model school.
ReplyDeleteWow Lexie that poem was amazing I think I could read it again. But just a question why did you do a poem that only rimed every two lines. But apart from that great job on your poem.
ReplyDeleteIt is a type of poem that only rhymes every 2 lines.
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