Hi im OLivia from Yaldhurst model school I like the way you put all the steps on how to do things Next time you could write more about how to do it though.but apart from that I fink it is awsome. from Olivia.
I liked how you did the fitness with lots of helpful steps. You brought me back when I was doing push ups. Maybe next time you can make the ending better maybe like you jumping mid air. Whats your favourite fitness? From Sahil :)
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Hi im OLivia from Yaldhurst model school I like the way you put all the steps on how to do things Next time you could write more about how to do it though.but apart from that I fink it is awsome. from Olivia.
ReplyDeletethankyou Olivia
DeleteHi I'm Sahil from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you did the fitness with lots of helpful steps. You brought me back when I was doing push ups. Maybe next time you can make the ending better maybe like you jumping mid air. Whats your favourite fitness? From Sahil :)
thanks for the comment Sahil
ReplyDeleteif gymnastics is a fitness that will be my favorite but if not I do not know