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Tuesday, June 30, 2020

Quick Write week 9

12/6/2020
                                        The Snowy White Owl

 One day I saw an owl. It was white with big yellow eyes .
It was a girl she was almost a foot long with a cute little beak,
the beak was black. She had tiny red feet. And her snowy white fur
was super fluffy.

2 comments:

  1. Hello Lexie
    I love your snowy owl story. It sounds very fluffy, the yellow eyes it has sounds very interesting. How did you get the idear? Maybe next time you could put some more infomation on your work becuase it does not have that much infomaition to read about. I like writing,do you?

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    1. KIA ORA Zoe
      thank you very much for you comment and YES I do like writing
      and I will put more writing on my next one

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